Posted: 4 January 2006, 15:47
RPGWriter wrote:
i think its reely hard get your stuff publihsed in the socalled rpg
industry now becaus pepole in the industry dont apreciate
good writing wen he see it lik ive written a book.they say it isnt good
enough but what would they know.just becouse theyve published
something id lik to publish something.theyre just scarred of talent
and people like me but they dont know.my book is finihsed and redy to
be printed if any compeny out their has the gut to put out... its
radical... better than teh saf shit you do now.Your just trying 2
insure u stay on top.
You appear to have made a number of mistakes in your post.
They are:
i think
its reely
hard get your stuff publihsed
in the socalled rpg
industry now becaus pepole
in the industry dont apreciate
good writing wen he see it
lik ive written
a book.they say it
isnt good enough but what would
they know.,just
becouse theyve published something
id lik to
publish something.theyre just
scarred of talent and people like me
but they dont
know.my book
is finihsed and redy
to be printed if any compeny out
their has the gut to put
out...
its radical... better than
teh saf shit
you do now.
Your just trying 2
insure u stay
on top.
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sentence should be capitalised. (5 time).
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an apostrophe. (1 time).
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this point. (1 time).
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mark. (1 time).
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requires an apostrophe. (1 time).
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an apostrophe. (1 time).
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only reason you want to publish something is because others
have published things - and I don't think that's what you're meaning to
say. (1 time).
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requires an apostrophe. (1 time).
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"scared", although as an aside, after reading this post they probably are
scarred, albeit mentally. (1 time).
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of you for additional reasons, beyond those of your "talent"; while this
might be true, I don't think it is what you were meaning to say. (1
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requires an apostrophe. (1 time).
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don't know? (1 time).
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your book is only ready to be printed if a company is prepared to publish
it, when in truth, it's either ready or not ready. (1 time).
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time).
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(they are). (1 time).
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engage in romantic assignations - I think you meant to say "put it
out". (1 time).
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times).
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the general readership of this forum and referring to publishers in the
third person. However, you have now started to refer to publishers in
the second person. (1 time).
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Logic mistake: the word you were thinking of is "ensure". (1
time).
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